"The Forgotten Survivor"

Although the fact that one of the four Crimson Guards that had attempted to capture Pit Fall, in Chapter 4:Target Pitfall, survived and that it is also relevent to the storyline as "My Brother's Keeper" continues, I felt that it slowed the chapter down too much. This information could easily be assumed by the reader and also explained later in the story as readers will see when Part 2 of "My Brother's Keeper" continues.

Previous to this scene, Pitfall had fought this Crimson Guardsmen hand-to-hand and almost lost. I was happy to show just how capable the Crimson Guard really are and how tough, as you see in the following sequence. It may be a short scene but one that I really loved and wished I could have left in the story.

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